One beautiful morning, I woke up and I was so happy because It. Was my birthday but I forgot it was school and I went happy to Angry. Because my mum would not let me stay home even If I Tried to beg but I didn't want to go to school but I went anyway. I Got to school. It was so awesome but the day finally finish'ed. And I got super excite'd when I was walking home. When I got home my mom said we have to get ready so all got ready. After we got Ready I was desperate to go so I kept'ed buging my mum She Got annoyed. She tried to calm her self down but she just Exploded. And she said be quite so I stayed quite. And went to my room and After five minutes. We finally left to my room. And we went to a restaurant and we ate Chocolate cake with chocolate on top. After that we played the Vending machine with my brothers and sisters and nephew. We played a lot of rounds after we went home we said our good Byes and left.
WALHT write an interesting recount I am trying to add more detail. I found it hard because you had to right the spelling right and put full stop in the right spots. Next time I want to remember to add full stops.
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